|Reviews for Lemonade Mouth, More than A Band|
| Mrs.Abby.Jenner 4/21/11 . chapter 5
loved it! update soon! Pretty please? :D
| ISmileAlot38 4/21/11 . chapter 4
1) Charlie should have a family death because then Mo will have sympathy for him and in movies, pity and sypathy always lead to kisses an relationships. It's just always happens. A parent dies and the sad daughter gets a boyfriend. It's very cliche, but it is sweet.
2) Stella should have a cousin come to town because then the cousin can cause random trouble and drama which is always satifying to readers.
3) Please just try your hardest to review the most you can, but no pressure.
BTW... LOVE YOUR STORY!
| June 4/21/11 . chapter 1
This should be movedto the miscellaneous movies category, or you should request a new category, but it can be taken down for being posted here.
| simple-string 4/21/11 . chapter 5
This was a reaaally good chapter. I really liked it.
Woo! Ya put some description. :D It was worth it. Very well written.
Oh man. This is like the Slumdog Millionaire situation. Where when Wen is actually 'famous' the mother wants custody.
I like that part at the end. Go ahead and put on my necklace mysterious person. Lol. Good thing it was Wen. (:
Please update soon. Not sure which update pattern ya chose, but i hope you can update as soon as possible.
Updates are my druuuug.
| GryffindorDutchess21 4/21/11 . chapter 4
Will Wen and Olivia eventually get together?
| Cady 4/21/11 . chapter 1
There is a category for micellaneous movies and these stories belong here, not under Good Luck Charlie, which they have nothing to do with.
| skyclouds 4/20/11 . chapter 4
I think cousin in town for Stella. I mean she just moved there it would be unrealistic to have her move again
| simple-string 4/20/11 . chapter 4
A'ight here I go:
1. Charlie .. Hm. Maybe we can go back to living up to his brother, or ... hm. Yeah, he's hard. So sorry, can't help with him. x.x
Moving Away. But I'd be soooo sad without Stella :'(
3. Maybe ... three days between each update. So say maybe .. you uodate Sunday .. then your next update is Thursday. Then Monday and so forth. (:
POST THE NEXT CHAPTER SOON :)
BE HEARD! BE STRONG! BE PROUD!
| E.A.L.Runaway 4/20/11 . chapter 4
As you've stuck pretty close to Mo and Olivia's characters, you should do the same with Charlie. Charlie was always living in the shadow of his brother. Maybe have his parents disappointed in him. If you really want a strong plot (and I don't want to come off as morbid or mean or anything), have his brother, Tommy, die. As for Stella, I think moving away would be a little to... what's the word, controversial? (I'm sure everyone would think its the end of the band) As for a cousin, even though relatives can be irritating, it doesn't seem like you can do much with an annoying cousin. Stella is supposed to be the strongest one out of all of them. Even in the movie, she was the only one not afflicted with anything when they went to perform at Rising Star. I say just don't do anything with her. You should have a character who is a constant, the rock for them all. After all, she is the one that brought them all together as a band. You could give her a small side story, but nothing major. Well those are my thoughts :P Hope you enjoyed my rambles. As for uploading distances, whatever works for you. Of course, for readers, its always the sooner the better :P
| La la land 4/19/11 . chapter 1
This chapters the best out of all of them! Plz finish witht the jail stuff! Great job!
| E.A.L.Runaway 4/19/11 . chapter 3
Haha, Stella dumping lemonade on the boys was funny. Nice chapter!
| simple-string 4/19/11 . chapter 3
Oh yeah! An update! :D
There arent enough Lemonade fics out therex so it makes me real happy when somone updates theirs.[:
Aww no Olivia x Wen? Lol, its alright, theyll get their moments soon enough. And besides, Mo needs the comfort from her Charlie-poo. :p
Updates bring me joy. (oh, and make next chappie longer, plz 8-)
| ISmileAlot38 4/18/11 . chapter 2
Wen's little sister is Georgie! The tech guy's name is? But anyways... I LOVE THIS STORY! Thank you for splitting up Scott and Mo! Mo and Charlie belong together! Oh yeah and before I forget... WEN AND OLIVIA are so in love and so cute! Okay well... UPDATE SOON PLEASEEEEEE!
| E.A.L.Runaway 4/18/11 . chapter 2
Wait how did no one else realize that Scott cheated on her? Were they that oblivious? And is this after the prison visit? If so, did Olivia not visit her father? The chapter was good though! The techie, as far as I know, had no name. (I've watched the movie like 5 times thanks to DVR :P) Wen's sister's name is Georgie.
| E.A.L.Runaway 4/18/11 . chapter 1
Aw, I love the relationship between the whole band. This story sounds good!