OOO, still really good. And, hey, at least you'll have tried to make them longer. But I still really love it. Keep going! Please!

Lol! Franny and Celine and Scott make me laugh. Make sure to jnculde some of Frannys witty jokes (we all know those :D) and I think a certain person by the name of Cameron wishes to be included! put me as te mean girl, thtll be hilarious ;) lol and Alexa as my right hand man cuz were super close now ;]

I like the sense of humor in this. You use very good indirect characterization, and you make it very clear what kind of people our two main characters are. I like Rain the most though, she sounds a little like me. I have no problem mentaly, but I act crazy a lot, and I'm a total weirdo. Well anyway, I really like this, and hope that you'll please keep writing it, for it is much to good to stop. Thank you very much, and I hope to see you next chapter.

oooo, I likes it! Although a bit short, it's very curious and makes me want to know: Who is this Nathaniel? What is Dreamland? And I like the way that you use the famous quote to show who is telling this part of the story. It's very well written, and I can't wait to read more!

nice

Lol this was hard to follow..oh miss fabro! P good teacher lol I member her:D ur a good we're keep it up!