 That guy 5/14/11 . chapter 16 Update! You can't just leave the story on a cliffhanger for YEARS! What the he'll, dude! |
 BabyKay86 8/15/10 . chapter 16 Hey awesome story I just recently saw FLCL and I'm a long time EVA fan so please write more 3 kthxbi |
 Kurt Baros aka The Falcon 4/3/10 . chapter 16i just finished watching FlCL on youtube and i think that you captured the characters real good i hope that you update this soon |
 Turtle Kid the Woolgatherer 1/23/09 . chapter 16I certainly did enjoy! This is wierd, with the fusion, but it works, it works. . . . _ |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 16All and all i love this story. I really want you to update again. I want to see what happens. Also is there any chance that in the future there will be more intereation between Naota, Hakura and Canti? |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 15I love the conversation between gendo and haruka. |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 13Brilliant! I am now one of your diehard fans. |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 12Kick Ass Chapter. |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 11Nice begining to the big fight comming up. |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 10Finally the Climax has arrived! |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 9THis chapter is so much more interesting than the last chapter. |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 8I don't think it was a good idea to bring Touji and the others into this story but I can't really have you change you story now that you have so many chapters. |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 6I like the conversation with Canti and Naota in this chapter. So far this story is moving along in a nice direction. |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 5I would like to congradulate you on doing a good job of potraying Naota in this story. |
 Laser Crusader 9/27/06 . chapter 4Wow it's quite suprising that Shinji discovered the connection between the robot and Medical Mechanica. |