For a plot-less story this is the best I've seen.

It's so heartbreaking how this doesn't have much reviews.

I really loved all the dsyfunctional descriptions and the title is creative.

Good job.

I thought that the way you described Beck playing games and how playing with Jade was so different, was written wonderfully. Nice job with this story. The way this is written really shows the romantic side of their relationship and the complicated hurt each other side. Really really nice job with this one!