  Mo 4/15/12 . chapter 4 this story is adorable! you should totally write the next chapterrrrrrr! |
 Mistress of Murder Rin-sama 8/7/11 . chapter 2Aw, cute. The story is great in most of the descriptions, and I hope you can conjour up some more humor. From now on, I will shout "Chef! Get him some egg rolls now!" during awkward silences. Not in Chinese though. |
| IamAthena 7/2/11 . chapter 3 The scene from ch 3 is from back to the future part3 I LOVE THAT MOVIE! i love that u used it! |
| IamAthena 7/2/11 . chapter 3 The scene from ch 3 is from back to the future part3 I LOVE THAT MOVIE! i love that u used it! |
| KiadaSong1 6/29/11 . chapter 4 Please write more! |
| Ranger Sage 6/2/11 . chapter 4 THIS..STORY...IS...PURE...AWESOMENESS! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!\
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Sage |
| Celle Qui n'Existe Pas 5/31/11 . chapter 3 This an awesome story update soon plz We need moar! |
| Radeca 5/30/11 . chapter 1 love your chapter so far its really cute smart to and all |
| love is killing me 4/22/11 . chapter 2 really cute :) |
| Winry-chan21 4/19/11 . chapter 2 Really good, I'll look forward to see the uodate soon |
| Celle Qui n'Existe Pas 4/18/11 . chapter 1 Loving it!:) Please don't stop it ther! |
| Your Sister 4/18/11 . chapter 1 So.. this is me, giving some feedback lol i think its really good and with the fixing of some grammer mistakes, very well writen, i like how you portray the characters :) so yeah.. see ya later bro ;) |
| DarkAngel 4/18/11 . chapter 1 Please update? This is really good, alot of your descriptions are good. I really like this, cant wait for the next chapter! |
| ThisShouldBeBlowingYourMind 4/18/11 . chapter 1 Please continue, you have no clue how disappointed I was when I found out there was no "Chapter 2" button. Write more. |
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