Thats lightning to a T

im a little surprised that there's no mention of cloud here in tifa's chapter.

That could have gone more well... The choice of words...I just think Kain's way of talking is more profound and deeper.

Sounds mushy, but Laguna's character is very amusing. I like his personality and this part sure made me smile.

A tad touching and sad... It's too bad Vaan wasn't able to see Terra again.

Resolute, determined, and straightforward-these are the words that best describe Lightning and I felt it all throughout this chapter. You did well portraying Lightning's train of thoughts.

Others mentioned the Laguna not knowing Squall was his son thing. I'd like the point out that a lot of the characters would know what guns are.

They also showed up in 7, 10, 11, 12, and 13. If you exclude him meeting the 11 characters and any of the villains, then Tifa, Yuna, Jecht, Vaan, and Lightning would be familiar with them.

I like this so far. Hope to see some for the rest of the 012 cast soon.

this is touching but just to let you know, Laguna never knew he was the father of Squall even if it was hinted towards the end of final fantasy 8 but Squall and Laguna never ever came to terms that they were related nor do they even knew the two were from the same world in Dissidia just a slight warning

bwahaha! laguna always makes me chuckle! also, he's like monkey d. luffy in a way, able to look at death with a smile on his face

Wow, you really got their personalities. For lots of people, it's had to get someone's personality right (not exactly challenging for me, though), especially people like Lightning. You got hers nearly perfect. It seemed like Lightning was really saying those things. And one minor thing; Laguna doesn't know that Squall is his son in the Dissidia world.