This was amazing & Rosie's POV was done very well!

I really liked the words you used to characterise Rosie's vocabulary, it really made the story more realistic. I love your interutation of how Rosie veiws the world. This story was beautifully written and I encourage you to continue writting and hope that you someday try to publish a novel of your own. see ya

they are so smart and we are so crule

I love reading Rosie's POV of this scene. Beautifully written. Hope to see more from you. )

That was very nice. Your the only person who has done Rosie's point of view. I also like how she describes Jacob as the red headed one and Marlena as the feathered one.

Great job! I like reading from her POV. Loved they way she described Jacob. :)