That was pretty! You write Lan so well! I feel so sorry for everybody in Clover though. Even A o.O

Pretty good, ne? I Love Ran, and there isn't anything that makes me happier to find his POV. _ It was all really good...Gingetsu crying...hmm. Questionable for his stiff nature, but none the less, it fit! Think on writing some more of it. It ended too abruptly for my tastes...but that's just me...

That was beautiful. :( So sad. Why can't anyone in Clover be happy?

*sob, sniff* Don't cry, Lan... I loved this fic! It's so sad...I wish A wouldn't be so mean...You did a good job of writing in Lan's perspective, too. _

Pretty! I especially liked the line "How can I love someone the least?" Great job! It was very sad, but I enjoyed reading it.