/We don't want to scream courtesan in heaven.
Oh, too too perfect-so Nini! (and thanks ever so much for not making her a bitch, dear.)

Wow. I was crying a lot. Like, a lot. You are such a great author. 'Tis not fair.

Wow.

I sit here, completely amazed by your writing. This only the second story of yours I've read, but your style and ideas are wonderful. If I can one day write half as good as you do, I'll be completely content.

The story was amazing. I look forward to more of your work.

i cried the whole way through! tears of pain, angst, sorrow, worry...and then joy, now elation...i love this so much! it's fantastic!

You're amazing! That's all I can say.
Poor Katherine though...

That's so sweet! You made me feel all teary... But it was beautifully written, I loved it. Satine and Nini's friendship was great but I felt sorry for Katherine, knowing that the one she loved, loved someone else more than her. (Did that make any sense?
Wonderful story, keep writing!)

Man! You've made me cry. You're a very talented writer. I don't know if I could see Christian getting married again. But it was very good.

It's a wonderful story as I expected, considering your other but I couldn't help but ask myself at the end, "Is that it?" But it's stil incandiferous. Keep writing; I'll certainly keep reading.)

Aw...that was such a good story...so sad...but good...)

so very veery good. damn i love it. poor katherine though. just liek the rest of us in love with christian. we know he's for satine. anyway i loved your story. very well written.

Oh...Nini and Satine's scenes were loverly, Camita. I loved it. But poor, poor Katherine, all alone.

Bravo! Excellent story!

**sigh Very nice! But i don't think that christian would have married again, but that's just me...)

Awww, Camie...that was positively lovely. It depressed me a bit to see Christian married again (I can't HELP it! It just seems wroooong. *tears but you wrote it well. I felt a bit sorry for Katherine...it would be so hard to live all those years loving someone who will always love someone else more than you. Anyhoo, the Satine and Nini friendship was priceless I liked that part a lot.

All in all, another perfect story.

Ciao now*Hannah

Katherine and Christian’s love had been purely mortal. It was no love that would live forever