Good work!

Excellent job as always!

Good work on this chapter as well!

Another awesome chapter as always! Again, sorry for the delay.

Good work! Sorry it took me so long to review!

The stories are very well-written! I love this!

Hi Used here, being lazy about sighing in. Anyway Ash and Misty are so cute together! These one shots give me hope and make my day. Great job keeping them in character! I love how they are add on ls to what happens inbetween.

There isn't anything else to say but excellent job!

Love it! Great job!

That was good, I enjoyed that. I do love how their relationship involved tearing each other down to build each other up; very twisted, but pretty effective. CAN'T WAIT for the next update, those are some goooooooooood episodes for this.

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:D Another great installment! It was nice seeing Misty's thoughts on Ash and how they changed throughout the series, you captured it perfectly. The ending bit put a huge smile on my face and the cup and water gun line made me laugh. Can't wait for the next one!

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! The characterizations of Misty and Ash were so believable. It was easy to see this being an alternative outcome of Ash's loss at the Indigo Plateau. It's amazing how you were able to basically run through the entire season in one story without it feeling rushed or anything, using important moments to define Misty's feelings on Ash's abilities as a trainer. The descriptions of Misty's thoughts on it were flawless! Seriously, good job. This s exactly how i would picture Misty's opinion on the matter. She's always been more calculative than Ash. That's why they're such a good match! She understands the need for logic and practicality, while Ash supplies the heart and determination. Your depiction of this was smoothly executed. I look forward to the next update!

Wow, I really enjoy these oneshots. I think you're very thorough and descriptive in your writing, with plenty of attention given to detail. I think this latest one has been my favorite so far because it deals with a lot of the more emotional issues between them that build up over the years. I didn't catch any grammatical or spelling mistakes. Great work and keep it up!

I like this, I think they were really sweet (though it's been years since I watched pokemon so I'm not totally sure on some of the references ") this last chapter was my favourite of them all.

Love it!