i was reluctant to read them at first but i've rather enjoyed these naruto world kaishin stories. i'm glad this one had an actual story line instead of a bunch of related drabbles and it was interesting to say the least to read about shinichi's parents disappearance. kaito's protectiveness was very endearing on that front. i liked him telling the kudos off. this was another great story alaena. _

A wonderful story. I enjoyed it very much. It was nice to see the slightly more serious side of Kaito that we know he possesses but doesn't show very often. I like the way you melded that part of him into the part of him that loves life. It was done very smoothly.
Keep writing and congratulations on finishing this story.
Nix

great ending. you should write another

Wow. I really loved it, especially the end and the way Shinichi felt and how he understood more about his parents. I really loved this universe and it's fun ninja-ness and I hope you a good weekend too)

Last chapter had a nice feeling to it but it's sad to have to say goodbye to the boys again for the time being.

Really enjoyed this story, it was as enjoyable as the first in this verse.
Shinichi is far more forgiving of his parents than many people would be but if Kaito says they will stay in touch, then they will!
Thank you for sharing this story, it was very enjoyable and you capture the characters very well!

aww... it's the end. but a good end to a very nice story! :D please write more fics! :D i enjoy reading your stories!

great story! i read the other one too and it was just as good! :D never imagines dc in a naruto setting before. but hey! it works! :D hope you write more! i'm excited for the next one since it completes the whole fic but i'm kinda dreading the next one at the same time cause it means the fic's coming to an end. So you have to write more of these great stories! :D

yay, everything's all good now!

of course, the two would need some alone time

it's still sad that it's ending in 1 chap though
thanks for the chapter,

waiting for last

hattori's a madman XD

and yay, Yukiko comes to the rescue!

she's awesome

thanks for the chapter,

update soon

as expected of kaito, he can tell if it's really shinichi or not.

and for some reason, i thought kaito and the imposter shinichi's conversation was funny
thanks for the chapter,

update soon

Well, I'll be looking forward to reading more of this lovely story then. Have a good week! ja...

of course everyone liked it :D

i love this chapter too! it really starts to get more into the mysterious parts

and poor Ran.

thanks for the chapter

i'll patiently wait weeks for the next

I really enjoyed this chapter because fir once someone portrayed the kudous leaving their chd alone in a less than good light. Shinichi and Kaito's reactions also grabbed me as being far more appropriate than just shrugging it all off or being off handed. Heart went out to Shinichi in this one but I enjoyed kaito standing up for him. Looking forward to the next chapter and really enjoying how you are weaving this together. Stay safe on your trip!

I love that line, "He's not yours anymore, he's mine." Kyaa! I love Kaito... and yeah, Yukiko and Yusaku do kind of sound like flakes... But I think you wrote it really well. Please update soon, darling!

I think you succeeded in making the Kudos sound like flakes. I was really made at them. And when Kaito said he wasn't theirs anymore he was his, I had a strong urge to stick my tongue out at my laptop. I can't wait for the next chapter