Awesome. The forbidden love works well with the next gen. LOL. I like this!

you can really feel their need for each other 3

Ah, I really like this pairing. They work well together( NOT as well as Scred, of course), but still.

I liked how you showed how Molly would react to finding out about her sister's attraction to their cousin. That's one of the biggest things that I always wondering about when it comes to cousincest: how would the other relatives react if they found out? I liked how Molly would've reacted; it was well done.

I also loved how they both were acting like different people just to make everyone happy and then depending on each other to be their true selves. It made the pairing really believable to me because it showed how that with such a strong bond, it would be pretty easy to start liking someone a lot, despite the fact that they were related.

I definitely want to read more about this pairing! I never thought I would or could like cousincest, but you write it so well!

:D

-Morghen

Awesome freeverse! Really really good! And this pairing is so cute, loved it:D

Dude, you know how I feel about incest. ;)

XD

This was awesome. It was great. I loves it.

I usually don't like Lucy, but I love the way you write her.

And Freddie! Dwaaaa! :) I love him. So adorable.

I love how they know it's forbidden/wrong, and yet they can't help it. Because they are in love. :)

Molly must be quite worried seeing that! Very sweet, my dear.