you stopped to update here? How could you! Story is so good. In my opinion Eragon should break the oath to Nasuada long ago it is her who ashames the relation between vassal and a liegelord, she cares not about his duties as a lead rider. I am also longing for more ExA maybe the new Faolin would beat some sense into her stubborn head. I am truly sad that you didn't update for so long couse the story is great... Subscribing and waiting for the next cool chapter)

Did you discontinue this? It's sooo good please update

Omg the ending :0. im as shocked as eragon right now.

Wow. That was really Good! i really enjoyed your writing, especially that last part. You deserve more reviews)

Wow! I'm so impressed with this story so far. It's so good and well written. And you say you were 14 when you started this? Wow I'm 17 and could never dream of writing this good. Keep it up because you have a hooked reader!

Sincerely,

sunnyboy

What the fuck? What is it with everyone and this fucked up desire to make Eragons life a complete shitstorm

Awesome chapter!

I loved the developings so far between Eragon and Arya and I also love the entire plot and the way you are handling it!

Just one thin Please UPDATE SOON!

Last update was two months ago, and we'd love to have another chapter up soon, especially since its the holiday season!)

i love the idea you have going here but i am confused as to what happened at the end there after "he" got stabbed

i will most likely find the awnser after i read more though so bye ...for now!)

i have read all of the chapters so far so pm when u update

First, let me say I enjoy this story very much. It is above average level IMHO, and most scenes are really good, I hope to see this being kept updated.

The last chapter in particular was good, unlike others I don't dislike it when Eragon acts "foolishly", quite the opposite I dislike it when he always thinks rationally about everything before he acts, especially concerning Arya (i.e. the dance scene, imho he should've asked Arya, because when it comes to emotions you can't always act rationally).
However, while that scene turned out not too bad after all, I disliked very much that the dragon was named Faolin. I don't see any reason for it to have that name. He is long dead and I don't think he still holds that much signifigance. For the dragon to forever have that name it just brings problems along the way by forever reminding Arya of her lost mate (if he even was that).

Ok, I don't hope this sound too negatively after all, I really enjoy reading your story! I am quite excited to see Eragon and Arya's journey and it is a nice turning point for them to leave the Vardens. Keep up the good work!

I've spent many sleepless nights reading this story, and during the day my thoughts rarely left it. It's one of the few storys that I enjoy reading dead word for word. I'm sad to see that it has not been updated in so long, but I will still check every day for it's return.

Great writing, looking forward to more.

good stuff... good stuff authors seem to get his fealty to Nasuada is hindered that she could exploit that no longer need or wanted... i like in the 4 book he tells her no more... u use it against me i will break my own oaths and leave u with nothing... which i really liked, though in the books she wasnt as badd as this idc lol i dont really like the character at all;... so eragon and arya are going to leave very nice... hopefully with book 4 out you can find more dirt to continue this maybe even change things if need its still a good story you could go on if u wanted to ... keep up the good work and hopefully you update soon

wow is all i have to say on this story and especially this chapter; normally i wouldn't have review a story i have just started reading till i reached the end. i found this from another inheritance fanfiction author that recommend it :P this really good stuff i really like how you put cut scene between Arya becoming a rider and her dragon hatching and with her talk with Saphira. Now after reading the forth book and this actually becoming reality :P though not like this and at the end of the book"come on!" I agree with you and actually Chris P wrote and knew that if the dragon hatch it need to be in secret and away from every body and time for it to grow and become big enough to defend it self(though i would have liked Eragon being able to train Arya but that one of my few cripes with that :P I like that Eragon had some balls and told Nasuada that he would pick the dragons over them and her any day which did happened :P love that scene. This is really good stuff i am going keep reading and probably review again sometime later in the story but i hope u keep continuing this :P

Waw what a fic. And the last chapter? Waw!. i really like the change and the way this fic keeps moving. can't wait till the next part and i hope it is soon.

Great chapter. Hope you continue with the story!