Pretty good. The romance is good, as is the writing in general. A little 'over the top(God of Power?), and the odd grammar/spelling error, but much better than most. It was very rewarding also to see progress between Belldandy and Keiichi. I give it a 8.5/10!

whoa that is one damn good story... lost for words for comments, hope you update soon

Great story, like the fire yoga part hehe burn.

That was the collest fanfic I have read in a realy long time. There were twists and turns that made the fanfic all the more interseting. The only thing I suggest is that you make Travin a little less perfect. Please write another chapter or a sequal or something like that soon!

One word. "Wow." The story has quite a lot of content, with well-established characters. If anything, it might be interesting to hear about some more adventures (e.g. everyday events gone bad, wedding parties, more fight scenes, etc.) Great story, and I hope to read more!

Hi, didn't get to review this first time around, since I thought there was gonna be a chapter 2, but seeing as you forgot about it... I decided to review my (still) favorite fanfic. Since, I'm not good at reviewing, and I kinda forgot what this was about, just wanna comment on the things I remember (as those are prolly the best aspects of this fanfic). I loved how you managed to put yourself in it without making your character too... erhm... cool. I liked the attacks your character had and how he fit in the story. Anyways it's a pity no one reviewed this and gave you encoragement. I really wish you can write another chapter. If you ever, email me at Thanks keep it up

hey that the best story i ever heard and its cool

I haven't forgotten about it, it's just that I have to write another huge chapter, so just hold on. I can tell you what's going to happen next though. Keiichi proposes to Belldandy, and I get to grant my first wish to none other than Ranma Saotome!

That was really a great plot and story. I'd really like to see the continuation... though I'm guessing you forgot about it..

Wow one of the most eye-catching fanfics i have read in quite a while. Keep up
the good work and hurry up with the nex part.

this was one of the best fan fics i have ever read, good job! though the character of Travin seems *too* perfect to the extent where he belittles Keiichi (hehe dont get too conceited Travin he fits well and is a good love interest for Skuld. There really is no rush with Urd's dilemmas but i *really* want to read the proposal already! Also i like how you made it so Keiichi is immortal in a very believable way... i'd like an excuse for either him to be a god or belldandy a mortal hehe. anyway, very nice and HURRY WITH THE NEXT SECTION! )

Great work. A win/win fic everyone.

more more more, you have taken a time to develop the story before you acheived godhood, which is very abnormal for a Ah Megaumi-sama ! self-insert, this I like, hope you continue this, and churn out more chapters ASAP...

Well come on whats taking you so long to post more chapters?

Whats 5 more minutes... and checks... damn no more chapters, twiddles thumbs, well? your keeping us all waiting... heh _

Wow...That was the best self-insertion I have EVER read! Great Job Travin!

write more!