So no one commented on the fact that James' eyes are not green, his son eyes are, but his are not. It seemed more like this was Harry more than anything. I don't get James from this or Lucius, this was simply Harry and Draco and you forget to change out the names. Heh.

Oh and so you know this next time, James' eyes are hazel. Those lovely green eyes you love writing about belong to Lily as it's so mentioned in HP I don't know how you missed it... you know because Lily is so beautiful and all.

Well smack me with a dead trout and call me Miley Cyrus.

That was beautiful. Emotional, sexual and actually deep. There was some serious meaning there; not just a simple scratch on the surface of thier complex, forbidden relationship. You put the rest of stories to shame. Seriously. This juicy little number outclasses them all. And you didn't even need SMUT to make it good.

That, my friend, is admirable indeed.

And why haven't you got more reviews for this ?

Hmm.

With Much Love
S.K.

This was so unbelievably heartwrenching. My heart broke with Lucius'.
I love the James/Lucius pairing ... the unrequited love just makes me so, so sad though.
Great, great work on this. I really loved it.

I don't know. I like it, and yet it doesn't really seem realistic to where I could imagine. I can, but Lucius doesn't sound like our Lucius, and I keep mistakening him for a older type of Draco-with the same fear of their father. I love Narcissa here, I love the said ending, I just wanna curl up and cry at all the feelings you pressed into this one shot.

Wow, that was excellent. I love JamesLily, but the yaoi in me craves the LuciusJames now and then. After all, their children keep getting together, and if they're splitting images of their fathers it makes sense that fans think of LuciusJames as well

*Beautiful*, simply brilliant. While I adore James/Lily I've been lately discovering the very much slash-y!James and stories like yours are the ones that keep encouraging me to read more.
Excellent work, I adored it.

That was...amazing. The pain, the longing, the anguish of losing something so precious. You make Lucius so real, so human...I like your Lucius much better than the canon one. The scene where he tries in rage to break the window was so beautifully symbolistic. But the whole story was just wonderfully angst ridden. And in a round about way, I understand what Lucius feels. Congratulations on a wonderful story that made me cry. Please continue to write beautiful things.

you should put that under angst,even double angst...
so sad...im crying...
I love it, excellent work.
Mistal
peace

Such angst...but good angst. So sad though, I like Lucius better than Lily.

*adds author to favorite authors list*adds story to favorite stories list
That was so good...like a sort of tense ache

A bittersweet story indeed. This is one good story...

That was great!I'm really liking this story.

Great stuff.

I really liked it!

! This was great! I loved it! Poor Luc! ARGH!*huggles Luc
This pairing is awesome! Great work!*Sparkles**

My god, woman! That was...beautiful. I would like to tell you now that your fic has realistic characters in a philosophical conversation and an intriging event. It's one so commanly flippant, so avoided during stories that it was unbelievable on how well it was executed. Lady, all I can say is "How dare you steal my idea and realistic characters and do a better job at it?" A stuff. No joke, man.