This shows promise, could've been a bit longer :) Maybe a bit more background on Icis' personality?

BTHEBOOKFREAK i order u to update right now i love it!

Okay, your PM is disabled, so I'm going to communicate with you through another one of your stories. I submitted the tribute Florence Wren for your story.

ANyway, the first time you sent me a PM about her, you wrote 36caramel, and then yesterday you wrote 36 no caramel. This is veeeery confusing. I think you've made a mistake. Can you try and explain this?

Dude! My school got out yesterday too! Hell ya! Happy summer! Anyway great chapter :)

this is getting better by the chapter. please update soon

I really like it! Since this is one more review, hopefully this will get updated sooner...

I really like it! Since this is one more review, hopefully this will get updated sooner...

Love the idea! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Kia

I think it's a bit short, but it's still good. I don't know if Haymitch would say some of that to Katniss, but then again, I know the hardness of having to stay true to the original novel. Other than that, 10 out of 10

Its really amazing! Keep it up! O, and sorry about the bunny...

this is one of the most interesting fanfics I've read so far!

Happy easter!

Thanks so much! :)

Great chapter, I love this fic!

Hey! You're BooksandMusic97, wow, you're like my, fanfiction hero!

I like it. Its really good. Keep it up )

I like this far! I'll read more, for sure!