. . . Things are getting tense

I'd really love to see the next chapters to come! You're doing a great job with this fanfic!

...Wow. Your notes after the story are amazing

Notes aside, I enjoyed reading this chapter! The awesome dialogues are there again (heehee) and the story plot is really lovely, and so are the characters.

I'd love to see more of it, please

It's really nice! The way you wrote the dialogues, most especially. Can't wait to read more of it!

(And I see what you did with the names... I see a Taemin somewhere there. Hehehe.)