|Reviews for Genetics|
| Onezumi Daisuke 6/9/11 . chapter 1
Good job with this story. I really liked the darker take on what Ritsuka is capable of doing. Very well done.
| Crescent Moon Magic 5/5/11 . chapter 1
Your work is beautiful. With your proper spelling and grammar and... oh, I've fallen in love. Your stories entice me so.
You capture these broken characters so tantalizingly, granting us brief glimpses into their minds, and it's simply breathtaking. I can't read Loveless anymore. It's sad, really, but you do a better job.
As for criticisms, your sentences occasionally border on run-on sentences. But it's nothing worth complaining about.
So, once again, I thank you.
You have gained another fan.
| Chou ni Natte 5/1/11 . chapter 1
I run a fandom recommendation site and rec'ed your fic, so I thought I'd paste my comments for you here. :)
Wow, this fic packs a punch! I loved it. Okay, so in the manga Ritsuka tells Soubi he'd never be able to do for Soubi what Seimei did...but that's based on his experience of abuse. There's a huge difference between pain for cruelty/insanity and pain for pleasure. I loved Soubi's reactions in this.