whoa...dang. tht was deep

Awwww Zach died! It was confusing at times like what parts were memories and what was the present? But I really liked it. Before you Said he died I was like "Zach ce back and sweep cammie off her feet Zammie 4eva" but then he dieeeeed :(

cute i liked it

Oh wow that's sooo sad but I love it!

awww that is so sad! and really sweet! it's great to see a little bit of a sadder, darker side of the characters. i love funny stories but the sad ones hold a place in my heart too, goood job!

I wouldn't have guessed even for a single second that this is how it would end..It was really heartbreaking...I love it..

that was so sad! i cried hardest the last 2 parts. you r a GREAT one shot writer for gg. this is the saddest oneshot ever but i still love it :)

I absolutely love all your stories. they make sense, have really good writing(i mentioned in a different review how i love your writing voice) , and all your stories are interesting.

you rock!

This was really good. I have tears that are like almost gonna fall out :/

I was about to cry at this, but it would look kind of stupid 'cause I'm my friend's house. This story, you made it so real that I thought it was the real ending. You have one talent, and plus its raining outside right now! My heart skipped a beat when I saw the gravestone. :( This is so... wow.

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Sad but still very goos

Depressing and amazing :) 3

Ohmygot. This is one of the saddest one shot I've ever read. But although it was gloomy, I absolutely loved it. Your writing,the story, captured all the emotions Cammie was (probably) feeling; sadness, hopelessness, sentimental, nostalgia, even some of the emotions that are indescribable. Thanks for writing (: