|Reviews for Olimar Discovers a New Pikmin|
| thethreelinks 4/12/13 . chapter 9
i think it would be cool if botmin also did half damage
| vincent.arnold.33 3/5/13 . chapter 9
| phanthom theif kid 1/12/13 . chapter 9
It looks like you accidentally uploaded an incomplete file.
| Golden Keyblade 11/28/12 . chapter 8
I'll try and cover everything in one review.
Blacks: No. This is the one idea I have problems with. Black Pikmin shouldn't be afraid of the light, and radiation panels seem extremely overpowered; and Black Pikmin DEFINITELY shouldn't be immune to explosions. The whole idea of radiation panels is good, and I like the design of Black Pikmin, but scared of the light? I don't like it.
Pink: Very novel idea, and quite possibly might be added to the game. The whole web concept is definitely a cool idea, and every obstacle should have a corresponding Pikmin to get around it.
Green: A fun twist on an overused idea. Well done. As you said, acid is just water but insta-kill, so having Pikmin with acid powers instead is much better.
Grey: Hmm...not sure about this one. It seems a little unnecessary to me. It's a cool idea, but it just doesn't feel very practical.
Brown: Cool idea. The whole egg thing is a little sketchy, but the Pikmin are a good concept.
Orange: Meh. Stench-resistant Pikmin are cool, but I can't help but feel another color would be better-suited.
Cyan: Nice. Feels just a tad overpowered, but quite cool. (Pardon the bad pun.)
Primin: Not sure how I feel about this. One the one hand it's a novel idea that could be quite cool; on the other, it seems a bit disturbing and they don't strike me as particularly useful.
Overall, quite good except for the Blacks and maybe the Greys. Good job!
| Ohfortheloveofpete 9/19/12 . chapter 7
| Ohfortheloveofpete 9/19/12 . chapter 6
| Ohfortheloveofpete 9/19/12 . chapter 5
Brown Pikmin are like moles, huh...
| Ohfortheloveofpete 9/19/12 . chapter 4
Grey Pikmin sure are flexible...
| Ohfortheloveofpete 9/19/12 . chapter 3
| Ohfortheloveofpete 9/19/12 . chapter 2
Pinks are resistance to glue, huh?
| Ohfortheloveofpete 9/19/12 . chapter 1
| phanthom theif kid 8/29/12 . chapter 8
these are pretty good ideas.
| Cytonic Flames 7/30/12 . chapter 8
:) Pink Pikmin are going to be in Pikmin 3 along with rock Pikmin. No jokes!
Awesome ideas too btw, Nintendo needs to use some of these.
| 7676 7/29/12 . chapter 8
stem is a fuse
| TheCopyUniverse 3/4/12 . chapter 7
*whistles* this is really awesome! The people who create Pikmin should definitely read this story! I wish that they could implement these pikmin into their next game!