Aww sad! A little much I suppose, but I'll put that off to her being pregnant. And I love Sirius when he's like this. He's just too cute and is (and probably will always be) my favorite character.

Bit of concrit:

-"could, in fact, at this very moment, by stopping off at the Three Broomsticks" - I think you mean "be stopping"?

-"But not at I usually do." - Do you mean 'as'?

-"full of that bitter dear that" - I'm not sure what you mean by 'dear'

-"foetal position" - is this how you spell fetal in the UK? I wasn't sure, so I didn't want to outright bash it.

Aw. Poor Lily.