|Reviews for Misery|
| Just An Old Typewriter 7/31/11 . chapter 1
Aww sad! A little much I suppose, but I'll put that off to her being pregnant. And I love Sirius when he's like this. He's just too cute and is (and probably will always be) my favorite character.
Bit of concrit:
-"could, in fact, at this very moment, by stopping off at the Three Broomsticks" - I think you mean "be stopping"?
-"But not at I usually do." - Do you mean 'as'?
-"full of that bitter dear that" - I'm not sure what you mean by 'dear'
-"foetal position" - is this how you spell fetal in the UK? I wasn't sure, so I didn't want to outright bash it.
| amy-x-ian-forever 4/21/11 . chapter 1
Aw. Poor Lily.