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Chaseha-Wing 3/9/12 . chapter 1
When he said "Now" I imagined he used THAT voice. The voice not even Bruce could copy because its the 'I'll murder u' voice. Nice work, tho I can't imagine Jason in the cave and house so much if he killed as much as he use to. Also Damien liking him is a bit off considering he;s always beating the kid to a pulp. Nice work tho, I liked it. And I also know- anyone would know- that if Damien continued on his rebellious path, that he'd eventually become like Jason; Dead. Its a scary thought, and I think EVERYONE in the bat family wants to avoid that. Even Jason on some level.
Lin36bffbecca 2/11/12 . chapter 1
Jason you're amazing loved the story
ChiChi-O 11/25/11 . chapter 1
hehe loved Damian's little temper tantrum at the end very well placed especially the duel apology at the end. Also the bonding between Jason and the rest of the boys was well done and beautifully written and I really hope this kinda thing happens in the comics because as you've shown the Bat brothers are amazing when together:)
cluelessninja65 11/24/11 . chapter 1
haha that ending was awesome! although i believe somewhere Dick's 'Damien Senses' were tingling right in his neck. or maybe throbbing... I love this series so much! it is definitly making up for the lack of bonding in the actual comics! Thanks so much for my fix!
Shenlong7 7/16/11 . chapter 1
I'd like to thank you for inspiring me with this fic to write and post another. Thank you and i have enjoyed your stories. have a lovely day.
Reagan 6/23/11 . chapter 1
If I could hug your Jason I would. Love, love, love that he sees how much that childish tantrum of Damian's hurts Bruce. That he won't accept his youngest brother following in his footsteps becoming bitter and resentful towards their father. That moment, apology at the end when Bruce accepts what is and is not said is perfect. Must have more of this and must have more Bruce/Jason interaction.
lizzysarai 5/18/11 . chapter 1
Yay more Damian pov! This whole fic was wonderful. It brought forward a lot of characterization and it has a very subdued atmosphere, in the way that it calm... Though there isn't much action, the interaction with the characters, the way you've handled them with each other, such as Jason and Damian, is refreshing and intriguing. I liked how you pointed out that they have more of a connection from Bruce and Talia, it jus added a whole sept to ther characters their interaction with each other. It really helps to develop more towards them as brothers.

Then Jason still being Jason and when he talks with Bruce. Him being in his room, describing his surroundings, it's so in depth, makes a nice clear image of what Bruce had felt, his own conflicting emotions, and being hesitant but still wanting to reach out to Bruce is so heart touching that I want to see it happening.

And then with Tim, bringing up old issues of the past, tryin to get over them, it shows growth in the process if the story (overall). And I love how you've kept them as Brothers. It rather rare to actually see that, (seeing the fandom) and you've just developed this whole relationship, and not anything sexual, just brothers, and that awkward yet endearing way brothers have of cheering each other up. Then the whole mood turns lighthearted with Timmys joke. You've completely captured that, and it's very wonderful.

And the end! Can I say just how much I am loving your endings! Bruce being overly worried batdaddy is wonderful, and Damian throwing a . Then Jay carrying him down the stairs is gold, something he would do, and both boys apologizing!

The whole story was very well done, nicely crafted and weaved. The emotions that get ripped out of you, and the mood the whole story has, that it swings from high to low, and then back again, is just perfect.
ethuil 5/8/11 . chapter 1
awwww i loove this story! especially the ending hahaahhaha. you're a great writer)
judy 5/5/11 . chapter 1
AWWWW!

I am in love with your stories!

i love 'em!
OhtarIstar666 5/2/11 . chapter 1
"How does he do anything? He's Dick "I'm a fucking acrobat" Grayson. The whole of the multiverse is generally in love with him, and everything he does is perfect by all accounts. And I'd like to note that I find it hilarious that you're jealous of his parenting skills regarding your kid." He took a deep intake of breath and caped Bruce on the back. "Face it: us mere mortals just can't compete. Accept it. I have." My favorite Jason line ever because it's true...
Chen-chan 4/30/11 . chapter 1
OMG, I love this. Poor Damian having to go off to the titans, which has gotta be one hell of a transition. Anyways, I don't know why but I love Jason centric things. I especially enjoyed him forcing Damian to be a good son to Bruce. That just made me so happy.

I really hope you continue this series.
Meinos Kaen 4/29/11 . chapter 1
Now, that's some fine older-brother stuff, right there
Alexis McIlwain 4/22/11 . chapter 1
Another masterpiece! I seriously hope you decide to continue this series. I always get filled with warm fuzzies when I read one of these. The Bruce-Jason interaction was fantastic, as was the brotherly love. And, personally, there are not nearly enough well-written Bat-Brother fics out there. In a nut shell, thank you for this wonderful little gift.
8sword 4/21/11 . chapter 1
SO. AMAZINGLY. GOOD. Seriously, you write the best Batman stuff I've ever read. Better than the comics, even! Usually authors tend to get one or two or maybe even three of the boys in character, but you do ALL of them, even Bruce, in such a believable, heart-warming way...it's seriously overwhelming. I'm actually not a huge Tim fan, and your stories make me adore him, while just making me absolutely swoon over Jason and Damian even more than I already do. Please, please, please keep writing for these characters.
Mutou Yasu 4/21/11 . chapter 1
I really love your stories. I especially love how Jason just starts dropping in from time to time. I can really see that, and I wish it was that way in the comics.
It was really nice reading Jason and Bruce's heart-to-heart chat, and Jason's indirect apology at the end. I hope this isn't the last one you do. It would be so awesome to see all of them together. _
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