I'm extremely jealous of your obvious talent. Are you a professional writer or do you want to be or are you just one of those people who is awesome in many forms?)

That was a sweet ending. Very sweet.

I like these little stories of Luke growing up. They fit so well with everything, it seems like they should be a real part of the story.

Awesome writing. Keep it up!

Glad I had read "Father's Heart" so it made more sense to me. Loved the way Obi came to Luke's rescue. Obi and Luke are my favorites-but Qui is cool too- can't help it. I dig the guy's rugged good looks and rebellious attitude!

Goodness. Has it been that long since I looked at your profile? This was a great story. I just love your style and characterization. Thanks.

And another winner from my first (and definitely best) fanfic author. Wonderful!

PS I understand that you actually do work on commercial fiction as well. Where can I get leads on your "RL" work?

Wonderfully written story. Bishapi's appearence certainly made the story intresting, I kept wondering how Luke was going to get out of that one.

Excellent characterizations. Great insight into Owen and Beru. An all around good story as usual. Your work is wonderful.

Superb, as always. A rare look at a well-meaning Owen without softening the edges of the character. I only wish you'd write more often.

Ye Ghods, but your stuff is fantastic.

Bravo! I'm glad you finally finished this story- great to see it here, Gala.)

Nice story. Thank you!

Thanks for a magnificent story. I enjoy reading about Luke's youth.

This was a great story. I loved how Ben actually was present in Luke's affairs even when he was that young. Keep it up!

Very good addition to the series. Hope to see more soon!

This was very good-the character development in particular