 longnite 4/21/11 . chapter 1They may have started out awkward, but they certainly fired all engines to blast past any hesitation ever thought of by our heroes. It was very sweet the way you used the question of Sha're to draw out Daniel and unravel how he felt about the woman right in front of him. I would have certainly paid to have seen such an intimate kissing scene as the one you portrayed. On a scale of 1 to 10...that one would have had to be a 15 at the very least! Very well played!;) |