loved the story, can't wait for more chapters!

This was an entertaining little short, but it seems somewhat out-of-character for Jane and Daria to involve themselves in Kevin and Brittany's affairs for no particular reason and then to set everything right again for no particular reason. I can see why they might find it fun to pull a little prank or two, but there didn't seem to be any motivation behind it.

cute. i love screwing with people's head. it's so much fun. Kevin and Brittany are such stereotypical airheads. good job. well written and in character. i want more chapters.

I enjoy your work. You should continue to post and disregard the critics.)