LOVE LOVE LOVE please please please with pineapple on top UPDATE! :)

Loved it! The way the characters acted and talked all matched their personalities on tv. If I produced the show, I would add this as an episode. :D Great job! Love the relationship between Juliet and Shawn, and the fact that it takes place at a water park. :P Update anytime, I'll be waiting.
Starburst

YAY YOU'RE BACK! This story is getting interesting and I like how Shawn doesn't flirt as much now that he's with Jules, it's really sweet! You write really well, everyone is so in character it feels like an actual Psych episode! UPDATE PLEEEAAASSSEEE!

... I'm so confused. D:

Maybe just because Psych is on in the background or I can't focus being on the computer for so long, but I'm not understanding what Shawn's epiphany is about.

Anyway, I'm glad that you updated! It was really interesting. The only thing is there is a little less flow then the previous chapters, but still, nice job. I can't wait for you to update again!

YOOOUUUUURRRREEEEEE BBBAAAAAAACCCCCCKKKKKK! ! Hahahaha as you can see I'm just a little bit excited. I LOVED this chapter! Hahaha I almost died laughing at Shawn and Gus with Brooke! Great! I hope you can update soon! :D

I wonder if Gus will figure out what's up with Shawn? OO what does Shawn think happened to him on the slide? Can't wait for the next chapter to see what's going on with the other folks at the park!

Definitely not too cliche to gulp:) I can't wait to see what's wrong with the slide! The challenge between Shawn and Jules is great:) Please update soon!

Wow, I can't wait to see what happens next! And please, DON'T HURT MCNAB!

I like it so far- just a little CC. It would be nice to see a bit more description. I know they are at a waterpark, but I'm not getting an image of it in my mind. (Maybe have more imagry...) It might help the flow a bit.

But other then that, it was great! Seriously, I'm so excited for the next chapter!

CupcakeNinja918

Oh, my gosh! I LOVED this! And go, Shawn! Afterall, he's got the hottest girl eva!

And you made me start craving snow cones... And I don't have snow cone machine!

:P

Always,

XxBaYFangirlxX

I can't think of what could be wrong with the slide :/ I can't wait to find out what happens!

*gasps* YOU'RE BACK! I missed you! (Is that creepy? Haha awk) I'm glad you're updating again:) it's inspiring me to update too...great few chapters and I hope Buzz turns out okay :o

Poor McNab! What's going on with Shawn? And, thanks, you did make this chapter longer and you updated sooner! A whole lot sooner, I may add. I'm sorry I couldn't review sooner, I had a French oral and I have a Civics test Tuesday, so I am pretty busy learning and stuff. Eitherway, I really enjoyed it and appreciated that you updated so soon!

Really happy that you didn't drop this story :D

Chapter 8-

Like it, but in this amount of time, i throught that you could put a scene when Juliet went to Shawn to save him... something like that... But maybe is better this way. I think that my idea is really comun and obvious.

Maybe is a little short, but for me is ok because i read the chpt 8 and 9 together

Chapter 9-

I can't understand the Juliet's idea. A man died in there and Shawn was unconscious. Why put another man in danger? Maybe he have some attitude that she is sure that he'll be ok?

This Juliet's idea made me curious about. :D

I think you will show us the idea in the next chpt...

Hope to see the continue soon.

PS:(Anyways i understand you. Sometimes this happen to me too... Especially with the comics. I did 3 or 4 but i uploaded only one.) Really long review, don't you think.

Love it plz update soon!

poor Buzz... update soon