Momo Nueve-Ag"The yaoi fan-(girl/boy) has been reawakened...

I have to say, I really like the plot line of this. It's good, you've got a great idea going here. I've been itching to do a same sex pairing in this section for awhile XD
The only thing I would say that needs work, would be your sentences in quotes, some punctuation here and there but I did enjoy it. It's a good start and great idea.

Don't stop writing!
Practice makes perfect. ]

this is a amazing story u are really good at writing I love ur story I hope u update soon can't wait to read wut happens next

shapeshifter are neather boys or girl they are what they chouse to be so if he likes Deuse become a girl if it was Cleo become a boy but with eather find out dream girl or boy and become that to draw them to them

I really liked the story It was different. Hope you could possibly make more yaoi for Monster high haha. Once again wonderful writing, keep up the awesome work hehe. Gosh I sound like I mother o -o XD
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good job if you never told me this was you first time writing this kind of ficion i'dnever know you did that good but im not one to talk becaues i havent written anything but i personly loved it and i cant wait to see what happends with this new friendship/hopefully soon to be couple. oh and the girl friend this is going to became a great story so keep writting and update soon even if you dont have very many reveiws,but i think thats because not alot of people have read this book idont know, but i havent but i show a fanfic similar to this one that how i found this story and i love it so again PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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This is f hot. So sexy. Maybe Cleo/Clawdeen next time? Sorry i would do that, but im behind on my stories.