  detter 1/12/01 . chapter 1 umm, correct me if i'm wrong, Nabiki is dead? than why's she alive in this chapyer |
 negai 1/11/01 . chapter 1Please continue the story! I love it so far. |
| torama-san 1/3/01 . chapter 1 Exellet work! write more please |
| Vina 12/5/00 . chapter 1 Aiya! Vina command crazy author write more! |
| Juuichiketajin 11/3/00 . chapter 1 (_) gimme part 15 |
| Atsuikaze 10/19/00 . chapter 1 Really cool!I look forward to reading all the other chapters! |
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