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   Darkflame's Pyre 4/5/12 . chapter 12Please excuse me, but holy effing crap that was amazing! Such an explosive story! The plot was complex and suspenseful, and the bits of action were heart-stoppingly exciting! It's such a pity about Ben, and thd damn Hood just wouldn't die! A real pleasure to read! Will there ever be an Arc 3? |
| Chrysexanthe 5/3/11 . chapter 12 Totally awesome saga! You had be completely hooked even the second time around (especially now that you finally finished it :-P) Seriously - you really did a fantastic job with everything - the plot was amazing - I was never quite sure where it was all going. So many twists and turns - I love it when a story isn't predictable :-) You did a wonderful job with the characters - you gave them so much depth - they were so REAL. Yeah, I am a little more coherent now, but not much - I was so emotionally wrapped up in this story! *grin* There are a few issues that you left unresolved... So, I have only one more thing to say - Please write more! |
| bubzchoc 5/3/11 . chapter 12 brilliant chapters |
| JoTracy123 5/3/11 . chapter 12 loved it grest ende ending, are u doing a Alan and TinTin stary linking to this. well done x |
| small-but-strong 5/2/11 . chapter 11 Hi LMC, I first followed these two series over at TIC. I loved them and I'm so excited to see the final chapters of this one taking shape. It's so fast paced, with so many twists and turns that I can feel the tension and worry that the characters are facing! I don't know how you have manages to entwine all the different aspects of the story together, from the different dimensions and the different elements of the story, but still keep the same family interactions between the characters. It makes for compelling (and addictive!) reading. I've lost count of the number of times I have re-read these series! Thanks for sharing these! |
| JoTracy123 5/2/11 . chapter 11 ok that was really good update soon xx |
| bubzchoc 4/30/11 . chapter 9 excellent |
| bubzchoc 4/29/11 . chapter 8 excellent |
| JoTracy123 4/29/11 . chapter 8 This is so good update soon xx |
| bubzchoc 4/28/11 . chapter 7 excellent chapter |
| JoTracy123 4/28/11 . chapter 7 love love it update soon xx |
| bubzchoc 4/27/11 . chapter 6 excellent |
| JoTracy123 4/27/11 . chapter 6 ok, first of is this based on the movie or tv show? . because if its based on the movie, at last you got Jeff and Penny together loved that, you know what would have been really good. if you had one of the boys walk in on them snoging lol. i can puture that. great work and update soon xx |
| Quickfade 4/26/11 . chapter 5 Fantastic, I loved the interaction between Alan and Gordon! Hmmm recruiting for IR and a long-lost son in another dimension... they wouldn't, would they? |
| JoTracy123 4/26/11 . chapter 5 this is really good, i am enjoying it update soon |
