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   Castor and Pollux 10/4/12 . chapter 2Excellent |
| ThomasNealy 10/4/12 . chapter 2 I know you say you are rewriting this story but i do not see any changes really. there has been nothing new that stands out, in fact they seem to have less in them considering you are condencing chapters. |
| meow114 10/3/12 . chapter 2 nice start to the rewrite i hope that this story is more technolgy enhanced by magic then in the first story where it was more like magic that looked like technolgy, i also hope that harry doesn't trust Dumbledore the way he acted in this chapter made it seem like he was acting and didn't realy care for harry. (Mrs. Figg reported that she suspected they mistreated but I could not legally come charging in without proof) Dumbledore admitted yet in the same chapter he said (went against your parents Will) which should be far more illegal, plus if he wasn't meant to be there in the first place it can't be illegal to remove him if there was even the littlest change of him being mistreated. thanks XD (hope harry downloads the ancient technolgy knowledge it's far more useful the magic) plz update asap |
| Casse01 10/3/12 . chapter 2 I am glad I found this story hope you get the rewrite up soon. - Casse |
| Corruptmonk 9/26/12 . chapter 2 looking forward to your re-post. :) |
| freethewolves1 9/25/12 . chapter 2 love the story |
| Darklight-phoenix 9/23/12 . chapter 2 PLease continue! I'm loving what you have so far |
| chaoswizard 9/21/12 . chapter 2 r u going to do any more on this its a good story |
| firelordeg 9/20/12 . chapter 1 thank you for sharing please update soon |
| HellsMaji 9/18/12 . chapter 2 Umm.. Isn't this like your third rewrite? |
| edboy4926 9/17/12 . chapter 1 Good intro Please continue |
| Mad about the Boro 9/14/12 . chapter 1 Cool. All you need to do is proof-read it a bit as there are several spelling mistakes (i.e. you spelt Asgard with a U in it; Occlumency has 2 C's; heir is spelt with an E not an A; you called Gripgook Grophook at some points; etc.) Also, the Alteran name for the Stargates was 'Astria Porta' & their name for ZPM's was 'Potentia'. Finally, this time around can you please refrain from using harry potter-ised names for Alteran tech (or at least have him start to think of them by their proper names as he learns more about science and Alteran tech & becomes more comfortable seeing himself as an Alteran rather than a Wizard)? It's far too confusing for us Stargate fanatics (i.e. calling the Transporters, Floo Closets makes no sense whatsoever seeing as they have nothing to do with the floo network; etc.). Anyway, good start to the re-write. Keep it up. |
| thunder18 9/13/12 . chapter 1 Great chapter Update soon |
| kemo9005 9/13/12 . chapter 1 nice start hope you will update soon |
| Yuuka Sora 9/13/12 . chapter 1 Like the rewrite so far and I just wanted to say something... the city ships flout right? That's why the Atlantis exposition are able to stay on Atlantis? At least that's how I understood it but I guess you want the power level at that so I'm shutting up now |
