 Doom Dragonness 8/27/11 . chapter 1I fully support GLaDOS being Chell's mother. It just makes too much sense. Good job! |
 The Great Susinko 6/11/11 . chapter 1I really loved your story. The introspection that GLaDOS was going though as that haunting song played for CHell was beautiful.
She had learned suffering through punishment, and mercy through redemption.
That part really got me as I agree with it completely. Thank you so much for writing this. |
 James Birdsong 4/28/11 . chapter 1 Somehow perfect. |
 PotterPhantomKitten 4/24/11 . chapter 1That is just about the sweetest mother/daughter thing I've ever read! Learning that Chell is GLaDOS's/Caroline's daughter and learning the English lyrics of the turret opera that GLaDOS sings to Chell as she leaves, just made Portal 2 a very impactful and emotional game, and your one-shot captures it very well! I love it! |
 Liber-T.E.A 4/24/11 . chapter 1Beautiful. Just beautiful. |
 Dessmond Williams 4/24/11 . chapter 1Very, very beautiful and a real heart breaker cause I felt the same way at the end of the game. T-T
Good work, Faux! |
 Kael Hyun 4/23/11 . chapter 1Awww you forgot the sweetest part: when GLaDOS sends Chell the Companion Cube back up with her! |
 o 4/23/11 . chapter 1 Well done |
 GLaDOS 4/22/11 . chapter 1 this is the first portal fan fic that i cried like a baby when i read beautiful make another one please |