AW! so sweet, actually bittersweet considering what lies ahead to change a nice little boy into such a cynical man.

SQUELS! That was so KAWAII, sweet... o.O i'm addicted, i can imagine a chibi Shuichi chan (well duh, he transforms into a chibi in the series) but i can also imagine Eiri san and Tatsuha kun. Much love

ah...so cute!love it !it so sweet!shuichi should have gave yuki a goodbye kiss*giggle*

Very kawaii! Love it!

That had to be one of the most adorable things I've ever read! I love Shu-chan, and I also love the fact that Eiri isn't a bastard as a little kid! That was wonderful! I didn't understand a lot of the Japanese, but I'm lucky enough to have a sister who owns a Japanese dictionary. I love the story!

Midori-chan

OOH, SO kawaii! *Squeals, hopping up and down* Oh Kami-sama, it's darling! _! Write more to this, please!

awwwwwwww! that was soooooooooo cyute! I guess Eiri-san wasn't such a bastard before he went to America ne?

good job _

*watery eyes* Kawaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii... SEQUEL! ... *falls over and twitches* The Kumas will get you...

Kawaii! Chibi-fic's fun. One thing though, I thought Yuki lived in Kyoto while Shuichi Hiro lived in somewhere else when they were young? Ummm ...
But this is really minor, I'm just being picky here. So don't mind me. Excellent job!

YAY! Please write more? This came out so welllll!

*giggles* That was cute. _ Poor lil Shuu-chan. And I almost forgot that Yuki didn't get all evil-ly until he was around 13... erm, I think he was 13... wait, I can figure this out... *goes off to do some important, Gravi-related math*

*squeal* THIS IS SO CUTE! Kawaii! _ I just want to huggle chibi-Shu and chibi-Yuki!

awww! that was so cute! *giggles* the cat! it's the cat! i liked it! write more! _

Yay! You posted it! *giggles* I said it once, I'll say it again. SO CUTE! *squeals*

Sweet and adorable story. If you are having trouble with Japanese, I suggest that you just stay off of it altogether. A good author doesn't mean you have to have a grasp on other languages. Stick with English.