It's rather obvious you were in a sad state while writing this. While it's sweet about how Ranma and Akane's life evolve together, the dissapearing of Ukyou and the death of Ryoga are simply heartwrenching, not to mention the poor Mousse. Still, it's really nice, although I liked 'Blame' better.

oh my god...that was so sad i was on the verge of tears...ja ne...

Did it have to end with death? *sigh* it seems your vent on killing Ranma and Akane :p

This was everything I've come to expect from you: deep, and almost unbelievebly mature. And so romantic. You are definetly my favorite author, and thanks for your email.

Hikari

that was so sweet

it made me cry

A very sweet epilogue to a lovely story.

Oh wow...I really liked this. *Maura*

Maaaaan! Why did Akane have to die! Jeez...

Oh, god. Yes, I do know what that means. And you know what I meant. martial arts. oh well. I'll fix it sooner or later. (man it just figures i'd do something like that. oh well.)

"Our fourth and final child was another boy. He was the one to really get into the marital arts.
This is one of those REALLY bad typos... You DO know what "marital arts" means, don't you?