This was heartbreakingly beautiful! Love it!

this was really good please keep up the great work

This was really good

You have no idea how many emotions I experienced throughout this entire fic. Happiness, confusion, shock, anger, satisfaction and most of all, deep sorrow. This story was absolultey perfect, it just really clicked with me. I was very disappointed with Supermans role in this story, and very glad with how Batman stepped up and became protective of SB. But then when it seemed to only be getting worse, supes saves the day, which I don't mind because I like happy endings like this. So good job and keep up the good work, because I truly hope you write another impacting story such as this one or add to this one, Idk.
Thanks
-27Steve

great story! I love that Bruce took up the father role! I was kind of hoping Conner would get a new Hero name or at least outfit...something that connects him to Batman and the bat family.

I got to the part where Bruce was all "This is not Cadmus" and the song Breakeven came on. And omg did I cry. I love it!

Awww. What a sweet ending. The story was rather gut-wrenching. I kept wanting to get a kryptonite two-by-four out for Superman's head and beat out the 'issues' he had, but I like how you resolved it in the end. He and Conner aren't perfect and they won't become extremely close, I don't think, but Bruce looks well on his way to more than making up for that problem. All things concidered, being part of Batman's family is probably the best thing that could happen to the kid. They're all a little messed up and all have traumatic pasts, but they're devoted to each other and Connor fits that mold better than the sunshine of the Kent's household (although I think the Kents would love a few visits from their 'grandkid').

It was a fun read! And I'm very glad to see that their was a happy ending (depressing stories are just so...depressing).

awww... so sweet! the perfect ending in my opinion. :)

Nice story.

I have to say, this is one of the best YJ fanfics out there! everyone is in character! And the story is so intriguing that I can't stop reading until I finished all 4 chapters!

...you make me stay up until 2 AM. lol.

It make me sad and happy at the same time. This fiction is brilliant!

Oh my god this was beatifully written. i almost cried when I read this. it was beautiful but sad. It almost made me cry when i read this. Beautiful, so sad yet a happy ending, Superboy going through so much. This will definatly be one of my favorite stories for Young Justice. Pure poetry. So sad. Happy ending though but still bittersweet seeing how much he went through. My eyes are getting moist. Again it was realy really good. I honest to goodness hope it never happens but if something like this did I would use your story as a template for the episode.

The only thing i was confused about was Roy. So Roy got the treatment from the Light, thinking he was a double agent but really The Light was playing with him?

Also how did thy feed Superboy the medicine when he was at Cadmus? Dit they fill his pod with the inhalent? Or since he probally wasn't exposed to yellow light could they penatrate the skin?

Another thing that I loved about this story was how you payed attention to all the details of Kryptonian anotamy and using realistic details about shots not working and anethesia not working.

Again Super good story it was heartbreaking. The only thing that I think needs changing would be the summary. It gives a false impression. All it says is "Superboy begins to suffer from clone degergation" I think that while it does capture the gist of it that sort of one sentence paragraph is more suited for one-shots. Since this is neither a one-shot nor a bad story I think that you might want to write a new story to let others know that this is a good story not a bad one-shot. maybe something like "Superboy begins to suffer from clone degeneration, the mentors and the rest of the team fight desperatly to safe him but can they outwit what is progamed in his very genes?" or something like that. Something that focuses on the emotions and the desperate quaity of this story instead of an emotionless one sentence summary. Something that captures the fact that theyre trying to save Superboys life here!

I hope that the rest of your stories are as good as this one and that this shall never happen to Superboy.

I like how you finally made Clark CARE about Superboy in the end.

Again beautiful piece.

Cheers!

Monique

This was amazing. I absolutely loved Batman here and how he adopted Superboy. Plus the fact that he can still stop everyone with just one word shows how awesome he is. Robin being Superboy's older brother was funny at first, but so heartwarming towards the end. And that ending scene was incredible. It's great how everyone manged to help, even Superman in the end. Amazing, amazing story.

Awwww such a happy ending. So cute. I knew superman cared. Super story, this was an original plot,awesome job. Two thumbs up:)

i liked this story.

I think I reviewed this on nonnie meme as well (?), but I thought I should do it again! I really, really enjoyed this take on the clone degneration prompt; I loved all of Young Justice trying to help in their own ways and Artemis askind her mother for help made me tear up a little bit. I loved the ending too, of course. Batfamily is the best family. 3