There's not much for me to say, except
This is beautiful.

I really like the unique stile that you are giving to this story. Love everything! Hope everything goes ok with Draco and Cordy...although I think it woun't because of the story...keep writting, this is very good and original.

unique take! I love it!

Interesting.

this is really good, i like it _

keep writing, i wanna find out what happens with cordy and draco- i also wanna know if draco lets it out that he's in danger. draco is so fun to write for, ne?

love always, anya

Well, I just realized that I left out a me in my previous review. It was suppose to read, "It just gave *me* shivers." This was the neatest little piece. I love you writing style and your Draco. Poor baby.:schnoogles Draco::

Ohhhh! Wonderful last line. It just gave shivers.

pretty good... keep writing!

OOH! This is good...thoughtful and interesting. Be sure to carry it on!

I love this Draco! (well, i love any draco, but i really like the way you portray him) the way you show him is exactly what i want! i tried to get it that way in a short story i wrote, but it didn't come out as well"The Dragon's Choice" by me, googleduckie).
So yeah, great job, and I hope you continue it!

This is quite a good start. I'm interested in seeing where the plot bunny takes you.

This is amazing. I really like the way you make Draco the real innocent one and not some jerk. It's deep and personal. Keep writing.. I would like to see more soon! )

grrr, I wanna be lazy. Oh well I'll be nice and review newayz. That was very good actually. It's sad. Good job. I do think you should continue.

Cool, keep writing. I want more! hehehehehehe!

great

interesting how Draco is bullied and no the one doing the bullying,)