O! Very cool! It gave me chills, I could almost hear his voice saying everything, a dark rumble. I never really thought of the Source/Cole this way, as two completely seperate personalities/minds. Very awesome. I like it a lot.

very well written.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

Wow.

Very dark and intriguing

Ivy

GREAT!

Great. This is really detailed and is very correct. I agree with many of your views. Great story. Is a chance for some kind of sequel? I don't know how, though.