So heart-warming...sniff.

Go on please!

It's good, i like the thought.. but the haze might be nice to keep Yukito confused, but it seems a little bit randome to me.. it's still a good story..

you people and your storries... why i get hocked i will never know but this was good. to bad this couldn't happen in the real story line...

anyway, i would like to say (besides Inuyasha) this is one of the best fics i'v stumbelled along in quit some time. i thank you for writing this and i personally would leave it as a one chapter becasue its such a nice ending as it is

i hope you keep on writing good story's like this cause it and you are now on my fav list! XD

Its an interesting start, I'm very interested to find out where you're going to go with this. Its not bad for a first start Keep it up.

If I may make a suggestion:

Try to make each chapter a minimum of 3000 words. There are no upper limits, the more words the better!

Good job though I hope that you update soon!