Cute and well written. Small thing though. I don't think Japanese children call eachother san. Chan and Kun is the normal way to adress children

awwww cute story loved it!

This was absolutely beautiful, great Idea and very well writen. Bravo! ;D

This was really sweet! I really liked it I only thought Hinata was slightly OOC but that's ok)

love dis!

How awesome! I like their sister-sister relationship and interaction. Cool!

Very different and sweet stirrings...cannot wait to see where this goes ...
Keep up the awesome work. well done!

Hi!
And... I LOVE IIIIIIIITTTT! really really much.
Greetings! n_n

*Snif snif* What a beautiful story!

Overall: a very good story. Cute and enjoyable.

gaaaangsta

That ended nicely.

WOW THIS IS A TOTALLY EPIC STORY AND I LOVE IT TO PIECES!

Really good so far! i pray that Hinata's life doesn't end up like the fairy tale she told Hanabi. hope u update soon.

I love your story!