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| Reviews for White Velvet |
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   Lulu Lollipop 11/3/11 . chapter 1mmm lovely ;) |
| MexG2 7/4/11 . chapter 1 Pure Smut Loved It |
| stargaze29 6/7/11 . chapter 1 YES! That's all I can say to that. This was your first fic? Definitely bolder than I was. : D Awesome first fic dude. : ) |
| ShadowCub 6/4/11 . chapter 1 Damnnnnnnnnn. |
| NANA100 5/16/11 . chapter 1 wow that was interesting. good job |
| vampire messenger 5/3/11 . chapter 1 now if only all of our roomates were alice or bella |
| Jay-Jay the evil cheetah 4/26/11 . chapter 1 Alice's thoughts whenwalks in on Bella:OMG, SO FUCKING HOT! MUST FUCK HER NOW! ...Or something like that...great story. |
| twistarwanabe 4/26/11 . chapter 1 whoo did it just get hot in here * shifts legs uncomfortably * lol good job keep it up |
| Fire-alchemist1 4/24/11 . chapter 1 I loved it. I got wet myself!:) hahaha |
| missysaaa.crystal 4/24/11 . chapter 1 It was good :) |
| SI 4/24/11 . chapter 1 Well, I liked it a good amount. As a general horny person (sorry if that creeps you out :D) and lover of yuri, I can say it's certainly up to standard (and my standards are HIGH). It's well written, very few mistakes, oh, and just incredibly sexy. Sooo... keep it up dude, welcome to fun world of FF, I hope to read more of you. |
