Even though it looks like you dropped this one I just wanted to say it's really good and well-written. I still hope you continue this somewhere in the near-future, but if you don't I'll reserve a day for sitting in my darkest corner...crying... or something like that ;)

YOU FINALLY UPDATED!

you know that i always love it when you do! Another great chapter! But you need to update more! I thought you had given up.

I dont know much about stardust but i really like reading this!

Update soon!

WOAH how many words has this chapter got! o.O Took me a while to read it but I enjoyed it more!

I do love your updates they make my day sooo much nicer! :)

Muahaha I was thinking about your update all day today ;)

Loved reading it! Lots and lots of description, action and tense moments in this chapter! Although perhaps it could be a little bit longer next time? . please don't kill me for saying that! x_x Plus I've told people to read your story in my next update which I'm still writing...damn this writer's block!

woah...this is the first stardust fanfic i've reviewed

looking good so far

hope you update soon

Hey!

YOU UPDATED AGAIN! YIPPEEEE! lolz

Another great chapter! as always ;)

I'm recommending my friends to come read it because its sooo brilliant _

UPDATE!

interesting start

there aint many good stories for stardust

update soon

tch- you disabled your anonymous reviews ... I was going to give you one like you did to mine T_T no matter ;)

I read your original and now that I'm even more happy that you changed it so its available on fanfiction!

This story is AMAZING! I really like the quote 'this is one fairytale that won't behave' that really drew me in. Your story flows really well, you have a good choice of vocabulary. Plus you had loads of descriptions and detail! It was like a movie playing in my head! _

I loved the characters! Your final sentence 'Magic had never brought her anything but pain' made me want to read more!

So hurry up and update! I cant wait! :)