This was a cute chapter! The Lumiere anecdotes were especially funny, and I am always one for stories about an extra servant character.

I have a suggestion, when you have long passages that describe daily life, events, etc., it would be better to break them down into very small paragraphs, kind of point by point. The reason is that I found it hard to read, and it was easy to miss out on things, because you had some nice descriptive details there. It also makes it much easier to follow along! Hope to see an update! :)

This chapter is still really good! However, if I recall correctly, it should be mon pere because mon is masculine while ma is feminine. And although the person speaking is female her father, the subject of the sentence, is male. However, my french is a bit rusty and I coils be wrong...

Please update!

A well-written opener. I hope you continue this story.

I hope you continue cause I love cogsworth!

please update! i am really into Cogsworth and the story is fab so far!

please write more i LOVE the former clock! please write ive been reading over this chapter ever since you postedit

This is really good mrmistoffolees! And btw you could use this name for Collette: 'la Roche'. I saw a movie at a friend's house this past weekend and there was a character called Monique la Roche. Update soon because my alert list is very crowded:)

Good beginning! You got Collette's character and personality across very well, and got to the point quickly with the exposition and setup. Putting this on alert!