Nice. The last scene made me giggle quite lots. :D

I loved the concept of this story and the execution was perfection. You've caught their voices so well.

Mum

That was cute and very inventively done!)

This was really fantastic. I particularly liked the bit about Seth Mann asking Mary if Marshall's girlfriend was right for him, given how Seth clearly thinks it should be Mary.
Nice work!

really rather brilliant!

well done!

I loved this. Seeing the progression and having it so well done was a double treat. I particularly loved ZMarshall painting the elevator, the two of them figuring out the boyfriend's the target, Mary doing his laundry, the whole bath scene, the dancing and the last "that's my girl", reaching for the wine,thw whole exercise area, and well darn, I should have just said all of it. Having their first time be disregarded as a UFO sighting was a great analogy and having her realize, finally, what it all meant to him was just beautiful. I really loved that you skipped the explicit getting-them-together part and jumped right to established relationship. Nice touch.

lovely fic. Very descriptive well-written.

That is such a story ! So beautifully written ... and each room being a part of their story, with memories in it ...

Absolutely loved it... The part when Marshall writes his will is heartbreaking ...
Thank you so much for this story !

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. The words, the emotion, the story. Excellent and thank you for sharing it.

Oh yes, you are awesome. Loved this!:-D

Oh gosh, can we just talk about how much I love this! I find this a brilliant idea and I loved every room! Being me though, I loved the home theatre the best. While these events do not foreshadow SYH's future...I can only hope they might influence you to make things turn out this way. I love M/M together too much for my own good I believe. Also, I loved the conversation with Seth...he knows, but is trying to be subtle! I loved this story so very much! Fantastic!)

Loved this! What a clever idea and so well executed.

This is a delight to read.

I love it! I adore the loft home you have created for Marshall (as you know). Seeing the evolving relationship between Mary and Marshall through the rooms of his home, that he has poured so much of himself into, was just lovely. Nice to see the little glimpses of a gentler Mary. And to see that Marshall has some semblence of a social life separate from Mary.

Really liked the interaction between Seth Mary. He knows!
The bit with the quilt was nice too. Mary for once not being selfish.

Mary nonchalantly borrowing Marshall's razor was a hoot. Not even considering the intimacy of such an act.

Thank you!

OMG OMG OMG ...this was more fabulous than I thought it would be!

Absolutely adore the idea of showing the M/M relationship progression through the architectural twists and turns of Marshall's loft.
Each vignette was perfect, and many just caused me to catch my breath and say, "Wow...damn." Loved the Master bedroom, the Butler's pantry, of course the garden...and the spare bedroom.
The MST3K party in the theatre room...genius!

This was fabulous! Just...wow!