Amazing. Well-descriptive, funny, and fluffy at times. You should seriously get a book published or something!

great story i have to admit, but i got some questions: 1 is this gonna be "Chiyo" centred story for the most part. 2 how far will this story go? just to the end of cell saga or will it continue further on into buu or whatever you make up 3 is Chiyo gonna be able to go super? i have seen many stories where author didn't allow girls to go super, but i think a diffrent kind of transformation for girls would be cool, maybe somthing like white hair with red blood eyes like in the ape form oh last question do gohan and chiyo have tails?

excellent.

amusing, thanks for updating and making the chapter long i apperciate it. please update and good luck until the next chapter.

So, Gohan going to be in the junior devision? he better win :D and if your doing this story like the one mainly about chiyo where it goes from now to buu saga i hope you have gohan continue his training after cell if thats in here i really dont like it when people have him slack off like in the show just doesnt seem right to me. anyways update soon!