too meaty. quite tough for a short pharagraph. i like the chosen words that was publish. good work!

This fic was so AMAZING. It's very intense and does sound like Lain. I loved how it flowed. The line "There's no reset button for the world, I don't think, and there's no reset button for me, either." was wonderful. And the ending was excellent. Please write more Serial Experiments Lain fanfiction. This was such a wonderful fic. I'm glad I found it!

It's just like Lain's perspective of view...and yet it gives you something to think about, like a lesson you would never think of.

really good.

wow. wow wow wow.

Omg...that was great.

Great fic, Alara! Exactly what Lain would've though. *clicks add to favorites*

This is indeed very Lain. Very nice way of putting Lain's view of things.

That was good. I liked it. Felt like the series.