very nicely written

lov it

How...touching! that was really sweet though I don't think that's Hermione's real nature. Keep up the good work. you should be a poet

Ahh...how sweet! I like it a lot!

I liked this story, leave it to HG to see a teacher in a new light. The varied pattern in your writting style is very readable.

..The whole thing was just too sweet! It makes sense that Hermione would look further than the mean and spiteful remarks that he makes. And, yes, if someone takes the trouble to look so far into a person, they probably would fall in love with them after a length of time. After all, there must be something that keeps them interested.

wow, this is great! I love it. I really like how you rhyme then just go into free verse and then rhyme again. thanks for the review.

nice poem...wish I could write stuff like that

Ahhh, nice...but of course, Snape wins, cuz of Alan Rickman...I actually want snape to like a student, its promising!!!

I LOVE ALAN