Hey Dragoness, I've read through your story and it looks really good so far. I hope to read more of it.

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!

Yeah like I said and I was right chaper 2 is the best there is.

On the best story ever scale...I will rate this story as a 100 meaning one of my absolute favorites

Hey cool story soo far

Wow a gir named Dart. Hmm how interestin', but I like it!

Well you are doing great on your story but let's see how chapter 2 plays out, I just hope it would be just as great as chapter 1.

But don't worry, you'll still get a good review from me.