 Raven34link 5/9/12 . chapter 1LOL
ha she got what she deserved |
 A Forgotten Fairy. .AKA- Fairy 11/3/11 . chapter 1hahahahahahahaha! go Logan! teach that jean a lesson! haha! :D and you're right, it is totally more a Logan/Jean than Scott/Jean or Logan/Ororo! this story was pretty entertaining! :D though most of them are!
luve,
Fairy! |
 SweetestSong23 8/2/11 . chapter 1Wasn't it King Thrushbeard originally? Hmm. Nice job with all of your X-Men Present stories! |
 jazzren92 6/23/11 . chapter 1 I loved The Twelve Dancing Princesses so much I sat and read the rest of the X-men Presents stories as well and although I may have gotten in trouble for not doing my chores it was definitely worth it :D I don't know if anyone else has asked you this but have you thought about doing one for The Princess Bride? Just a suggestion) |
 Thomas Linquist 5/20/11 . chapter 1Nice story. I'd forgotten the original tale until I got into your version.
Jean stuck on herself? I just don't see it. Not from her movie incarnations.
The last line was precious! "that Hugh Jackman guy"! Har! |
 MaddAlice 5/2/11 . chapter 1I have to say this is the first of The Xmen Presents stories, that I have not heard of before. It was lovely) |
 TheAnnoyingOne97 5/1/11 . chapter 1I like it. Even though I don't really like the Logan/Jean pairng(LOGAN/STORMY ALL THE WAY!) it was still a good story Can't wait to read the Thumbelina story! Hurry and write and new one! |
 roguelover321 4/27/11 . chapter 1this put a smile on my face i dont mind jean/logan put i do hate rogue/logan
do more
and how about(for a new story) tangeled (yes rogue and gambit love story) |
 SuniGyrl 4/27/11 . chapter 1Good job hon! You picked just the right characters for this. Jean definitely makes a good spoiled princess. Her comments were hilarious! And so was Remy, as always. I love the banter that he and Rogue add. I was wondering where Ororo was, or why she wasn't commenting, but I figure that she's secure enough in her relationship with Logan to sit this one out and not get upset that he's 'married' to another woman in this. Though I am very curious as to which story you will use that features Logan/Ororo. And to hear the comments from the peanut gallery on their relationship. That should be good!
Kisses Doll xoxoxo
Jesus Loves You and So Do I!
Halle ;D |
 I Skip-I Trip-I Fall 4/27/11 . chapter 1Ha ha ha ha. I love this. Rogue has stopped her feminist rants. That was a pity. Oh well. |
 Navigator101 4/26/11 . chapter 1This was rather humorous. I figured James was the King in actuality it just fit though I don't recall this fairytale. It was cute. Remy trying to picture Jean in a french maid outfit might be bad for his health though. Rogue is possessive. |
 tfobmv18 4/26/11 . chapter 1I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work. |
 MASTER-OF-SUPRISE 4/26/11 . chapter 1lol at the commentary. great work as usual chellerbelle. |
 aecul 4/26/11 . chapter 1Haha! I liked that a lot. Especially'I just don't think you'd make a beautiful princess, Scott,' Gambit said." that part (lol) and Scott and Toad and Logan. I'm very anti-Logan/Jean but this was cute. Lovely job, really funny. Probably one of my favorites of yours.) |
 Cy 4/26/11 . chapter 1 Haha, I loved the Hugh Jackman comment! |