i love the history, update soon.

I like the idea of your story. However as I was reading the first chapters, I noticed that it was mostly dialouge between the characters. I hoped that as the chapters progessed, there would be improvement such as more descripition of the scenery and such, but as I looked onto the next chapters, I saw pretty much the same thing. Description of the scenery, the characters, the clothing on the character or even the personalities is what makes the story better . Without it, the story seems to get boring and leaves the reader trying to picture the scenes in their head but that's only my opinion. I'm sorry if this sounds harsh as I'm only leaving this review to help you improve on your writing, not to criticize it. I do hope you will continue your story)

This story is very well rounded, though it seems a little 'perfect'. The Pharaoh is a little too... One sided, even though he and Yami are supposed to be the two sides of one person. I hope the Pharaoh gets a little bit of a dark side to even out his character in the future. The plot so far is fantastic, and the characters very relatable. Good work overall

she's Yami's girl! DX

LOL!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

And there's Yugi's girlfriend.

LOL! XDDDD

DANG! You're just putting twist after twist!

Keep going.

This is a beautiful piece of fanfiction, though i have one complaint. Your chapters are a bit too short well, that and the conflicts are resolved a bit too quickly for my tastes. But that may just be me. You plot development is really good, and your story made me actually respect Tea as a character. Quite a feat. Keep on writing!

HA HA! OMG! This is so funny, I couldn't help but giggle the whole chapter! LOl!

This was really good.

Could you make it a bit longer though? PLEASE?

Anyways! Thanks for the chapter! I look forward to the next.

Oh Sh*t

*stares
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

More more more PLEASE! :D

oh excellent really i love it!

Part dragon huh?

Hmm... are you going to put it as a Romance/Supernatural then?

Anyways, nice job! :D

Hope to see the next chapter (or chapters)

Gosh I did NOT see that one coming... O_O

Good chapter didn't expected an update that fast your like REALLY awesome lol I can't wait to see what you make happen to our favorite couple)

Hiya! I loves and I can't wait for the next chapter!