Liked your story. Especially like Kyp and Jaina's daughter. I always loved K/J stories. Interesting tie-in with current issuses too.

Very good! an interesting story, not drawn out and well written! i enjoyed it.

im not a J/K person but this sounds interesting. i put it in my favs and ill continue reading it when i have the chance.

Oh, so your just going to leave me hanging like this? Please write more soon!