This was great. I felt you really captured Joe's character. I'd love to see you come back and finish it.

Sorry damn &£ iphone keypad - finger slipped and tapped sth i shouldn't have and got the review sent before i was finished.

Anyway, i love your writing - and how you have kept to the movie's tone too.

Please don't take too long to post the next chapter. Thanks!

I was wondering if anyone had tried out a fanfic for RH, after recently rewatched on a plane. And i am so glad to find yours! I think you have got me out of only following Pride & Prejudice ffs.

Please continue the story. I am very intrigued by what Mr James will do next - if he will exp

Hi, I watched Roman Holiday recently and, while I loved it, the ending made me sad. So please, don't give up on this story! I know the last update is only about three months ago, but I've read so many stories before where the writer is going strong until they suddenly quit. This is pretty good, I'm honestly surprised that more people haven't tried rewriting the ending to this film.

Shannon-You made my day! I am new to this site and did not think in a zillion years I would find a fanfic on Roman Holiday. It, too, is my all-time favorite movie and I have often wondered about an after story.

I love, love, love your story. You are a great writer and I cannot wait to see more chapters. You have the characterizations down perfectly! While many writers make things a bit contrived in A/U stories, your dialogues and characters are believable. It takes a lot of finesse to make someone believe that true love could happen in one day...and you've got it!

I'll definitely be coming back for more! I know perfection deserves time to create, but hurry and post again soon!

THANKS! RF

Beautiful work. I continue to be amazed at how you keep the mood of the story just perfect, your awareness to the details of the time period, your flawless characterization...it's almost as if you were Dalton Trumbo himself!

Oh THANK YOU for updating. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you!

This is a WONDERFUL story. In such a small, small fandom, it is a treasure to find such a well written story as this. You have the characters down to a science; their inner dialogue is perfect. Even Mario Delani. It's amazing. One thing I would say is to maybe add a little more humor (I like the bits of dry humor you already have, just a little more is good) since it was a romantic comedy. I love this movie so much, and you've done justice to it. I hope you continue this story!

Please update soon. I've always loved Roman Holiday and I've always wondered what would have happened if Joe and Ann got together again. So please update soon, you're doing a marvelous job with this story.

This story seems to have great potential! Hopefully it will be a nice long one and updates will come soon.

I love it and I sincerely appreciate your mentioning me in your "thanks"! I'm very intrigued about this mystery man, so I'm anxious to see how this goes!

I was so honored when you asked me to beta this story for you because you've done such a wonderful job with it! I hope there will be more to this because I absolutely LOVE Roman Holiday, and cannot wait to see where you go with this!

Simply lovely and realistic to the movie. Might there be a chapter 2? Perhaps an exchange of letters?

This was so lovely! Well written and very true to the characters, nice job:)

Very sad, and superbly written.

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